kalil

Review: Kalil (Special Operations Command Book 1)

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Description

Due to language, sexual content and sexual violence, this book is intended for age 18+.

Since Marissa Taylor’s narrow escape from her would be killer, she’s been on the run. He continues to hunt her, leaving behind a trail of misery. Even the FBI can’t catch him.
When Kalil Masters, an agent in a CIA Special Operatives Unit is sent to “capture or kill” the predator, he's prepared to use any means necessary, even if it's using Marissa as bait. Playing on Marissa’s trust is the hardest thing Kalil has ever had to do, but the ends justify the means, don’t they?

Book Details

  • Title: Kalil
  • Subtitle: Special Operations Command Book 1
  • Author: Stephanie Reynolds
  • Type of Book: eBook, Erotica, Thriller
  • Pages: 336 pages
  • ASIN: B00O5V5Y4W

Review

Once I got into this book, I couldn't put it down. The cast of characters is smart and sexy, and I enjoyed being part of their lives. The plot was incredibly exciting. I didn't have a clue how it would end, and I was not disappointed once I got there. The author winds together two thrilling missions that the team executes, and the tension propels the book right to the end.

I did find some of the writing "bulky" at times with some repetition, but the plot was so compelling, I could put that aside and enjoy the story.

Excerpt

He ran his hand down her stomach, then leaned in and kissed the same trail. He licked around her belly button to her panty line. She pushed her pelvis up to him and he backed away.

“Don’t stop,” she moaned.

“Patience,” Kalil whispered as he hooked his fingers into her panties and slid them down her legs.

She was gorgeous lying there bare for him. He grabbed his dick and started stroking it. He was rock hard, but he wanted this for her. He could wait.

Kalil leaned into her pussy and sniffed. He loved the smell of her scent—sweet vanilla.

He lay on his belly and spread open her pussy lips. Shalo moaned and squirmed when he licked her sweet juices. She was always wet and ready for him.

“Keep still, babe.” He sucked on her clit then slid his tongue inside her hot pussy. He could feel her throbbing against his tongue. His dick jumped with anticipation.

Kalil leaned over to the bedside table and grabbed the lube, the plug and the condoms. He sat up, opened a condom and put some lube on the plug, setting it on the bed for now.

He slid two fingers into her pussy and rubbed her clit with his thumb. She was panting harder now. He raised her knees up and placed her feet on the bed so he could see her better.

Her pussy lips were pink and swollen from his attention. They glistened from her sweet juices.

He changed hands and slid his middle finger with her juices on it to her ass and slightly inserted it.

“Don’t tense. Just relax.” Kalil watched her mouth open as she gasped. He loved the look on her face when she was like this. He inserted his finger all the way and kept his eyes on her face to look for any discomfort.

“Oh....” Shalo tensed.

“You’re so tight, babe.” He leaned down and sucked on her clit while his finger slid in and out of her ass. He grabbed the plug and positioned it where his finger was.

“Relax babe. I need you to relax.” Kalil felt Shalo’s whole body relax. He removed his finger and pushed the plug in slowly. Shalo groaned and Kalil pushed it until it was completely inside, the button part still sticking out.

He pushed the button and it started vibrating.

“Oh God!” Shalo screamed. Kalil sucked on her clit and slid his tongue as far as he could into her heat. She was ready to come that quick.

“Come, babe.” Shalo tensed then began to shake a little as her orgasm rolled through her. He could watch her come undone all day long.

Her body had a layer of sweat and was pink from the heat.

Kalil sat up, slid on the condom and leaned into her, taking her mouth with his. In one swift motion he thrust forward sliding into her hot pussy.

“Kalil!” she screamed. Kalil could feel the vibrations against his dick. If he didn’t take it slow, it would be over before they ever got started.

“Damn, you feel so good.” He sat back and lifted her ass as he thrust in and out. Her skin was hot to the touch, which turned him on even more.

Kalil went deeper and harder. The plug vibrated against his dick while Shalo milked him. He wouldn’t last must longer.

“Shit.” He couldn’t take his eyes off her as he slowed down. He reached up and removed her eye mask and untied her wrists.

He leaned back on his feet and raised her up to straddle him. He watched her face as she focused. He wanted to be looking at her as she exploded.

“Ride me, babe.” He could feel his muscles tightening in his body. He knew he was close but didn’t want it to end.

Scores

Title, Description and Cover6.5
Characters9
Story, Plot, and Action8
Steaminess9
Bang for the Buck10
X-Factor8
The cover pic is enticing, but the title and description don't give much info about how much heat and thrill are packed into the story. The characters are steamy, powerful, and lovable. The plot is a thrill ride from start to finish. At 0.99, this book is a huge bargain. What tempers this score is the bulkiness of the prose. With some trimming of the extras, this will be a top-notch novel.
8.4
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