innerbeauty
Title, Description and Cover9.5
Characters9
Story, Plot, and Action9.5
Steaminess6.5
Bang for the Buck10
X-Factor8
A complete short story with erotic content. This one is tame for Writerotica, but the sex was well written and entertaining. The writing is very slick, too.
8.8
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Five Stars

Description

Inner Beauty - Craig believed that a person’s looks were more important than what they held on the inside. Little does he know, an old girlfriend is about to show him otherwise.

* Contains erotic content

Book Details

  • Title: Inner Beauty
  • Author: S.J. Hermann
  • Type of Book: eBook, short story with erotic content
  • Pages: 24
  • ASIN: B0177E61NQ

Review

I read this, not knowing anything about what the author usually writes, and I didn't know if I should expect erotica or what. I was pleasantly surprised to find a sexy short story, rather than a sex scene or a chapter of a story. The author succeeded in making me detest the protagonist, right from the start, and the ending was very satisfying.

The writing is excellent as well. No errors, no extra fluff. Just clean, enjoyable writing.

This is a great short read!

Excerpt

Kimberly embraced Amanda, her lips roaming around her neck causing her to break eye contact with me and lean her head back. The subtle moans, their naked bodies in close contact—all their sights and sounds—had my hormones in overdrive. They were dangling a man’s fantasy a few feet from me, and there wasn’t a damn thing I could do except lay there in erotic hell.

“I’ve had him before,” Amanda said, before giving Kimberly a brief kiss. “I’ll let you go first.”

Kimberly smiled. “No, that’s okay. We have all night, sister. I’ll get my turn several times.”

This isn’t happening to me! This had to be a dream, or worse, a nightmare. Feel something, damn it! I screamed at myself. I tried to shut my eyes, but I was compelled, no, forced, to watch. Amanda positioned herself over my cock and got down to her knees. I didn’t want to see this. Not because of her size, that didn’t matter anymore, but I didn’t need to stare at someone I was starting to care about use me for her own pleasure.

I penetrated deeper into Amanda the further she squatted down on top of me. She let out a heavy sigh, signaling I was deep in her. Fuck, I wanted to sense the warmth, the moisture of her, but I was denied any satisfaction. I tried to close my eyes and drift to another place, so I would not have to witness what I could not sense. With her head on Amanda’s shoulder, Kimberly recited some kind of passage in a language she uttered before, her hands squeezing Amanda’s large breasts.

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